Prim Murdered!
Today, 30 December general Prim has dead because an organised attack.
The Spanish Prime minister has died in his palace due to the infected wounds produced on the organised attack occured three days ago at the exit from parliament. He was going towards the Ministery of War. It is not yet known the responsable of the murder.
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