MOSCOW IS IN FLAMES
Tuesday 15/09/1812 (Perm)
The last Monday, 14 of September, the Emperor of France arrived with his army in Moscow, and would have taken the city if our great army hadn’t done anything or hadn’t moved the citizens. But why did we have to get to this point?
Napoleon has been ruling in France since 1804 as its Emperor (obviously, he declared himself the Emperor) and he has got kind of prestigious for conquering the most part of Europe, even if he’s having problems with Great Britain.
Spaniards are trying to revolt, but, in the middle of that, Napoleon has decided to go to our homeland, that’s how greedy he is.
Alexander I, Our Tzar
But we won’t surrender, we didn’t the last 7th in the Battle of Borodino, we could even resist the bloodiest war that the French Army has ever done. Fortunately, our great Tzar, Alexander I, has the perfect ways of winning this war, we’ll use our big land to weak the enemy, we won’t give anything to them, it’s preferable burning it down that to allow them to get it. And that’s what happened in Moscow. Our army took most of the people with them, they abandoned the city and let it in flames, just to not permit the enemy to stole us any supply.
The moment when the invincible Napoleon’s Grande Armée will weaken is near, and then Russia will took its revenge.
The Battle of Borodino
The last Monday, 14 of September, the Emperor of France arrived with his army in Moscow, and would have taken the city if our great army hadn’t done anything or hadn’t moved the citizens. But why did we have to get to this point?
Napoleon has been ruling in France since 1804 as its Emperor (obviously, he declared himself the Emperor) and he has got kind of prestigious for conquering the most part of Europe, even if he’s having problems with Great Britain.
Spaniards are trying to revolt, but, in the middle of that, Napoleon has decided to go to our homeland, that’s how greedy he is.
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| Alexander I, Our Tzar |
The moment when the invincible Napoleon’s Grande Armée will weaken is near, and then Russia will took its revenge.
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| The Battle of Borodino |
I really like how you have written the new,it looks like you´re reading an action novel!. I think you could have chosen a different video about Napoleon crowning himself,because the one you choosed was a bit boring but the other two videos were entertainig!
ReplyDeleteINÉS GONZÁLEZ
Interesting point of view Inés!! Good! News is plural
DeleteI really liked your news, it is very interesting and it seems totally removed from a piece of news, I have understood it well also by Oscar's explanation in class, it has cost me nothing.
ReplyDeleteSofía Martínez
Good job! I liked it a lot as you wrote it, it was very well explained and I found out very well, I liked that you put more than one video, although one of them got a little long the others were good.
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LUCÍA GONZÁLEZ
More than one video?
DeleteIt´s good. But... I´d like you to put more than one video"...
DeleteI have liked the new , it wasn´t very long and it was well explained , the technique used by the Russian army very smart , but quite worrying that they burned all their land in this cold-blooded way .
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ReplyDeleteDaniel Morán
Very good Daniel! Thanks for the interest
DeleteThe information is quite good and is written as a news programme
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Edgar Miguelez
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DeleteI liked the news because it also shows that there is a lot of work since there are data such as the name of the battle that Oscar did not mention in class and that it is seen that they have bothered to look.
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