Joseph I new king of Spain
The past 6th of June, Joseph Bonaparte was proclaimed king of Spain.
Joseph I Bonaparte, the older brother of the emperor Napoleon Bonaparte of France and the former King of Naples become king of Spain after been proclaimed by his brother in the abdications of Bayonne.
Napoleon obtained the Spanish permission to cross the country to invade Portugal. Also his intention was to invade Spain.
In the Revolt of Aranjuez, the Royal Family tried to escape from Madrid. Napoleon forced Carlos IV and Fernando VII to abdicate in favour of him and made his brother king of Spain.
Joseph imposed a Constitution with enlightened reforms such as liberty and equality for all citizens.
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- The separation of powers.
- Removal of internal customs.
- Inviolability of the address.
- Personal freedom.
- Rights of the detainee and prisoner.
- Abolition of torment (related to physical and moral integrity).
It´s a good article to be the first one, but I think you could improve your next articles. For example, the paper version could be much better.
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This news is good, I like it because it has many links to give more information, and for me it is very rare that Spain let Napoleon cross the country knowing that he invaded all the territories to which he went. On the other hand I do not like the version paper as it could have been separated by lines the different parts of the information because now it is difficult to understan and it can lead to errors when reading it, but it seems to me a very hard news and of a topic that was not given much importance and is part of the history of our country.
ReplyDeleteRubén Berciano Monroy
Good contribution and analysis. You are making a big effort!!
DeleteThis news is good but I think that if they had looked for more information that wasn´t in we have given in the subject would be more interesting. The video has good information but if it had more drawings would be more entertaining.
ReplyDeleteNerea Rubio
I like the news, the topic is good and the information is interesting but I think it isn´t well redacted. I like the links which add more information because they make you easier to understand the situation of the event. I don´t like the paper version because it is not organized and the ideas are mixed, so it can be a bit confused.
ReplyDeleteLaura Pérez
Good contributions Laura. Thank you.
DeleteI think it is good but links and the video are not very good, nevertheless the paper version it is organized and well informed.I think is very interesting the nicknames of Joseph I,too.
ReplyDeleteÓscar Barrio
I liked the idea of talking about Joseph Bonaparte but it has a lot of temporary jumps because it starts talking about the proclamation of Pepe Botella and then it is said the constitution he stablsihed but in general, the new is well writted and has cohesion.
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DeleteBe careful with spelling Sergio!!
DeleteYour article has good information: it talks about the Bayonne abdications, revolt of Aranjuez, it includes links and you also said in the interview some principles of the constitution; but it is poorly well organized and when you are reading it is not attractive to your view.
ReplyDeleteAinhoa Menéndez
Your article it’s not very interesting and attractive to me, I think that is a little bit bored, and the information it's not well placed in time, but I liked the information that appears in the links and the video. I also liked that you said how he came to the throne and the characteristics of the constitution. It would be better if there are more photos. I don’t like so much the paper version because it’s all the information mixed and it is confusing.
ReplyDeleteMaría Mata
Your news is good and has various links and a video that give adding information, which is nice if you want to know more about the topic. However, I think you could have added more photos, as it just tells how did Joseph became king and in my opinion, it has been a bit boring. Another thing I haven't liked is the paper version. The information was poorly framed and this was confusing. I didn't know where should I start to read it...
ReplyDeleteLeticia Fernández
It's a good article in general, with good links and explanations. You provide useful information abaut the Napoleonic invation to Spain and the reign of Joseph Bonaparte. The only bad thing I would say it's that the article is not original at all I think you can improve that.
ReplyDeleteRaúl Monje Alegre
I really like how you started the new whith a short summary of the topic, but i didn´t understand quite well how you do the rest, because you continued in a very strange way, with many temporary jumps that could have been avoided by organizing the information better.
ReplyDeleteAnd abaut the paper part, i find it really extrange because it does not seen to be a newspaper. I thick you can improve it.
David Santiago
Good intervention!
DeleteThe topic of the new is good and also the little summary to introduce it. The links are quite good as they help you to understand more clearly the concepts. I don´t like the paper version at all because the informarion is not well organised.
ReplyDeleteCristina Miguélez
News is always plural
DeleteI like the concepts of the new,but the way that is explained is not very good because you don't understand very well some concepts.
ReplyDeleteIsabel Gonzalez
I like how the article is written and the topic is really well explained. It's also organized, with many links of important concepts that help you to understand them; and the paper version is almost perfect.
ReplyDeleteReading this article I end thinking Joseph I would had been a better king for Spain due to his constitutional ideas. It's a pity.
Lucía Cuevas
I have liked the topic you have choosen because is something that we haven´t develd into in class and the way it is redacted is quite good. You have include several links to add information and that is very good; but i think you could improve the papaer version, it is difficult to read and confuse. Good article!
ReplyDeleteÁngela Alonso Páramo
I really like the character of Napoleon because he is very interesting but the information of him and the rest of the notice is not very well organized. The paper version its good but you can put more images.
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