Saturday , 31th December 1870
OUR GENERAL HAS BEEN MURDERED
Prim dies after several days of suffering
It was around 7:30 pm, and a heavy snowfall was falling on the door of The Congress and waiting for the general,there was a green carriage pulled by two horses.
They were heading to the presidential residence when they were surprised by two carriages that crossed the path with three armed individuals. The assistant warned him that they were going to open fire and that they should get out of the carriage and tried to defend themselves. The general received three hits in the left arm that caused damage to the hand eventually causing the amputation of the ring phalanx and a shot in the shoulder whose shrapnel fragments remained until 2:00 am on Wednesday.
After the attack, the general remained several days at rest and under medical care , but unfortunately yesterday Saturday he passed away.
It is claimed that the general died from the injuries but we have found strangulation marks on his neck that seem quite suspicious.
The general had many enemies, which implies that some of them could be the murderer; he had mainly turned against Isabel´s supporters by dethroning his queen and the Carlists for the result of The War.
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