END OF A DUKE, BEGINNING OF A WAR
29-06-1914
Yesterday one of the most tragic events of the decade took place . The Austrian's archduke, Franz Ferdinand, was assassinated. However, this slaughter didn't attempted just with his life, but also with his wife's, who was pregnant of their fourth baby.
Last morning, at 10:00 a.m., the archduke's vehicle was victim of a bomb that, luckily, bounced and exploited in the street leaving several injured people, although the Austrian couple remained alive. The author of this first attempt is a Serbian separatist called Cabrinovic, who tried to kill himself after the unsuccessful explosion but got arrested.
Twenty minutes later, the archduke was in the Town hall giving a speech. When the act came to the end, he set his direction towards the hospital in order to visit the victims, but his car never arrived!!!
The vehicle´s engine stopped working during the way, so this was the perfect moment for Princip to execute his plan. Gavrilo Princip, like Cabrinovic, was part of an organisation named The Black Hand". This terrorist group of nationalist ideology wanted to reunificate Serbia and this project included Bosnia, an astro-hungarian territory.
Everything was planned carefully and Franz Ferdinand was getting closer to his death. It was 10:55 and the murderer was ready. He took out his gun and started walking towards the car. One shot, the arch is dead, two shots, the wife is dead. In just two seconds this cruel act caused the chaos.
Could be this the beginning of a war between the mid Europe and the Slavic territories? We will see in the next days if the countries make a declaration.
I really like the distribution of information in the article, the images are well chosen but in the second the original color of the suit of the archduke was blue. It seems to me that everything is written and explained in a very correct way.
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Good morning guys! I have really like your article because it is explained so clearly the archduke´s death. I have found very interesting that his wife also died, I think that almost anybody did not know it. And I also learnt that she was pregnant! Would the baby has conquer all Europe if he had not died?
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